from you, Bert. But I want you to remember this little line from a great poem: âThough much is taken, much abides.â Some of your spirit was taken, yes. But thereâs plenty left. I see it in your writing, and I know itâs still there inside you. And I know youâll find it.
In closing, a demand and an invitation: I demand that you feel good about this piece. Itâs fine work. Itâsthe absolute real thing. And I want to invite you to write for The Explorer . If you think youâd enjoy it, come see me.
Gene Tanneran
Bert is still a little light-headed from this praise. The feeling has diminished since this morning, and it never was the dizzying rush heâd feel sitting up on the stage. But it feels good.
Bert wonders if heâd be up there on stage if so much had not been taken. He also wonders if much abides. Sometimes he wonders if there are any positive qualities left in him at all. Tanneran was kind to say so, but that doesnât make it true.
The thought of other kids reading his writing is scary. But itâs also alluring. Bert would like to write for the paper. Is the possibility of recognition worth the risk of ridicule? Thatâs the question heâll have to answer.
Chapter 15
Peckered
The writing Bert did for The Explorer wasnât much fun. He did, however, like opening a new ink-smelling paper and finding his byline. Heâd scan each page with care, and when he saw his name his chest would go tight for a second. His stories were informative and clear, which is all they were supposed to be. Heâd written about tennis, cross-country, junior varsity football, and the new horticulture club. Bert wasnât contemptuous of news writing. He liked the symmetry of the inverted-pyramid style that required the most important element in the lede and elements of declining importance below.
Bert wrote his stories at home after work, and he would not have wanted anyone to find out how long these short, simple pieces took him to complete. It was tough to come up with the right words. When he found the right words, it was tough to get them into sentences that flowed smoothly, then into paragraphs that broke from one another at logical junctures. It was tough to get all the words together so they fit. This was why Bert couldnât believe Tanneranâs comment that he was a good writer. If he was good, how come it took him so long to write a sentence?
The writing Bert enjoyed most was what he did for Tanneranâs class. Bert did no homework but English. He knew he should, but he just didnât feel like it. There was too much other stuff going on in his life. There had been, for example, his motorcycle-riding exam to deal with.
Bert Bowden
Junior English
October 4, 1989
PECKERED
My boss, Scott Shepard, proprietor of Shepardâs Classic and Custom Cycles, warned me that the State Patrol had it in for Harley riders.
âTheyâre pricks to anybody rides a Harley,â Scotty said. âDoesnât matter what the guy looks like or how he comports himself. J. Edgar Hoover comes back from the dead and rides through the state of Washington on a Harley, these guys would bust his bulldog jowls from the Idaho border to Puget Sound.â
âOnly two living beings more contemptuous of Harley riders than your basic Washington State Trooper,â Scottyâs brother Steve said from beside me where he sat on his idling Harley. âOne is a Washington State Trooper who has drawn out-of-state vehicle inspection duty and meets a Harley rider bringing his bike in from California and applying for a Washington title. Those inspections are like a Red Cross search for tainted blood. They check every orifice in the bike and in the owner right down to the exhaust port. Officious pricks,â Steve said. âReal peckers. And thorough.â
Steve looks like a bad biker, a 1 percenter as they are referred to, but heâs not.
I was mounted on my