peeve, Mrs. Tweedy, I would say itâs sentence fragments. You really dislike it when a sentence lacks a subject, verb, or both. Maybe thereâs a bright side, though. At least in an English paper, you can go back and edit a fragment to express a complete thought. In life, when a thought is interrupted, thereâs often not much that can be done to correct it.
I was almost finished explaining what Iâd seen in the cemetery, about to launch into a flurry of questions for Bizzy, when the door to the hospital room swung wide open. Mom came in, holding a bouquet of liliesâBizzyâs favorite flower. Dad trailed behind, fiddling with his newsboy hat in his hands.
âWe came to check on how you girls were doing,â Mom said, sweeping into the room, placing the flowers in a vase by the window.
âRita, you shouldnât have,â Bizzy said. Darn right, Mom shouldnât have. I was right at a crucial point in my conversation with Bizzy. I wanted them to leave immediately.
âIt was no trouble at all,â Mom said, adjusting Bizzyâs movable tray and cleaning it with a sanitary wipe.
âThey hire people to do that for me,â Bizzy said, frowning at Momâs efforts. âHow long am I in for, Phillip?â Bizzy asked.
âThey want to keep you overnight.â
âFor cryinâ out loud!â
âHave you read How Green Was My Valley ?â Mom asked, taking a thick paperback out of her bag and putting it on Bizzyâs tray. âYouâre going to need some entertainment while youâre here, I know, and itâs such an easy book to get lost in ⦠I thought it also might appeal to your Welsh roots.â
Bizzy shoved the book off the tray. It hit the floor with a thud. She folded her arms defiantly over her chest. âRita, I donât want to read, you hear me ? I want to talk to my granddaughter. Alone.â
Every eye in the room shifted to me. Mom bent over and picked How Green Was My Valley off the floor. She gently placed it back on Bizzyâs tray, her face shadowed with defeat.
There was a knock at the door. A nurse entered the room.
âIâm afraid that Dr. Stuhl has instructed me to clear the room of visitors. The patient needs her rest.â
âIâm no chi-ull!â Bizzy exclaimed.
âItâs okay, Mother,â Dad said, grabbing her wrist tenderly. âWe should be going, anyway. Weâll be back later to check on you.â He leaned in and kissed Bizzy on the forehead. âLizzy, too,â he added, smiling nervously. âAfter school.â
âA few shackles and bars and this placeâd be forced to call itself a prison!â With that, Bizzy closed her eyes. Dad, Mom, and the nurse filed out of the room.
Soon, I was the only one left with Bizzy.
âNo need to fret, Sweet Pea,â Bizzy whispered across the room. âRemember what I wrote in my note.â
âOkay,â I said, unsure of what I was supposed to remember.
Dad poked his head in. âReady to go?â
âYeah,â I said, garnering a wink from Bizzy as I left the room.
Though Mom wanted me to go to school, Iâd had no trouble convincing Dad I was sick. When he dropped me off at home, he said Mom would swing by to check on me during her free period. Despite Bizzyâs assurances that there was nothing to worry about, I wasnât convinced. I was convinced, however, that the key to it all was Vivienne le Mort. In my judgment, there was only one person who could tell me exactly who she was: Agatha Cantare. I did the math. I had an hour until Mom would arrive at the houseâplenty of time to get to the cemetery and back.
When Drakeâs black Ford truck pulled up next to me as I made my way to Cemetery Hill, I viewed it as an unwelcome interruption of my quest for information. Of course, back then, I had no way of knowing Drake Westfall was essential to every answer I was seeking.
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