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Sometimes too-dense fine writing is simply a psychological tic on the writerâs part. The prose of the first thirty pages of Nabokovâs Ada is a barrage of language released from occasion. It is a breastwork of puns and cryptic allusions which effectively defend the novelâs contents from the readerâs interest, until Nabokov is good and ready. The opening of Cormac McCarthyâs excellent Blood Meridian and his Suttree are similarly obscure.So, for that matter, is the opening of War and Peace âbut not because of its prose. Many great writers accidentally release and reveal a certain amount of self-consciousness, anxiety, or even hostility as they settle in, or resign themselves, to the task.
Fine writing is still with us. Density, even lushness, and formal diction, forceful rhythms, dramatically fused imagery, and a degree of metaphorical splendorâthese qualities still obtain. Henry James launched the century with a splash: The Ambassadors, The Wings of the Dove, The Golden Bowl . It is hard to see why writers write anything else after James, and readers read anyone else, but literature persists.
Here in the generalized category of fine writing belong the brittle sarcasms of Nabokov, and his much-wrought tendernesses, and especially his cryptographsâthose challenges to literary criticism and parodies of its finds that are such red herrings to young writers, who must endlessly be relieved of the notion that the criticâs role is to âfind the hidden meaningsâ and the writerâs role is to hide them, like Easter eggs. Here also belong the poignant lyricisms of Beckett, the embroideries of Gabriel GarcÃa Márquez, the surrealisms of Italo Calvino, and the polished turns of Milan Kundera. Traditional in their elegances are E. M. Forster, the Ford Madox Ford of The Good Soldier , and Richard Hughes, Anthony Powell, Joyce Cary, Edna OâBrien, the D. M. Thomas of The White Hotel , Julian Barnes, and Graham Swift. In this country, grand stylists like E. L. Doctorow, Lee Smith, William Kennedy, Marilynne Robinson, Louis Begley, Denis Johnson, John Updike, and William Gass continue to expand the territory of fine writing.
Penetration may no longer be the fine writerâs intention. A fine writer may now, as in the eighteenth century, be ironic or playful as well as sincere. He may brandish his wealth of beauties in a traditional way, as a traditional painterly painter handles paint: to describe beautifully and suggestively, to engage us, to fashion a world in depth. Or he may go abstract, and raid the world for fleeting images from which to fashion a moody expressionistic surface. This is Gass: âThe sun looks, through the mist, like a plum on the tree of heaven, or a bruise on the slope of your belly. Which? The grass crawls with frost.â
CALLING A SPADE A SPADE
Other twentieth-century writers avoid fine writing. Borges, interestingly, disclaimed his early story âThe Circular Ruinsâ for its lush prose. Fine writing does indeed draw attention to a workâs surface, and in that it furthers modernist aims. But at the same time it is pleasing, emotional, and engaging, like quondam beautiful effects with paint. It is literary. It is always vulnerable to the charge of sacrificing accuracy, or even integrity, to the more unfashionable value, beauty. For these reasons it may be, in the name of purity, jettisoned.
With Flaubert a new value for prose styles emerges. Prose must not be elaborate, at risk of being lacy. Instead it should be, as the cliché goes, âhoned to a bladelike edge.â This is a new sort of beauty in prose. Verbal dazzle, after all, is almost universally attractive; nineteenth-century Europeans admired it enormously. It takes a sophisticated ear, even a jaded ear, to appreciate the beauty and integrity of a careful simplicity. I
James Patterson Maxine Paetro