hadnât bathed or changed her clothes since yesterday. She made her way over to Jane, William, and Daniel and took the empty seat next to William. Watching Ivy sit down a little too carefully, Jane wondered if sheâd been drinking.
The atmosphere was subduedâAdam, Rhoda, and Ginny serving, everyone quietly eating. Adam, crossing the room with a tray, gave Jane an imploring look. She nodded.
âWell,â she burst out sunnily. âHow are everyoneâs stories coming along?â
They all looked at her, wary expressions on their faces.
Finally William looked up and smiled at Jane. âI think mineâs a real humdinger,â he said in his thready voice. âMaybe Iâll get myself one of those movie deals. But Iâve got to executive produce.â
Everyone laughed, the atmosphere loosening up.
â Iâve got a hell of a story,â Ivy suddenly announced. The room grew silent again. Everyone watched her, waiting.
âMm-hm,â she continued matter-of-factly, spearing a piece of chicken and putting it in her mouth. âItâs going to put someone in jail for years and years.â
Again the uneasy silence. Jane didnât blame Ivy for feeling bitter toward Johnny and was happy that her friend was rid of him, but she didnât like the way this conversation was going.
âWhat about you, Carla?â Jane asked.
Carla looked up and scowled at Jane, who refused to be intimidated.
âHow is your novel coming along?â
âFine,â Carla said brusquely, and looked away. âPass the butter, please.â
Jane gave up. The remainder of the meal was eaten in virtual silence.
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The atmosphere of that eveningâs group session made Jane nervous, as if the air itself were charged.
Tamara read from her novel, about a woman dying of breast cancer. Red Pearson ripped it to shreds, calling it maudlin and melodramatic.
When he read from his own novel based on the Boriken Social Club tragedy, Tamara got him back by loudly scoffing at least three times.
William Ives, in his thin, shaky voice, read a passage from his novel about a lost woodsman. To Janeâs surprise, it was extremely well written. She noticed Arliss, Williamâs instructor, nodding approvingly at the other end of the room. Jane wondered, perhaps uncharitably, if Arliss had rewritten Williamâs material. Brad Franklin, as if reading Janeâs thoughts, called out, âSounds like your teacher helped you with your homework.â
âWhat is that supposed to mean?â William demanded.
Brad laughed, his shoulders rising and falling once. âItâs obvious. Arliss rewrote your stuff. Or maybe she just wrote it, saved you the trouble of doing anything at all.â
A hush descended upon the room. Arliss was watching Brad with a shocked, hateful look in her eyes. âThat remark was totally uncalled for, Brad,â she said, âand I resent it immensely.â
Brad laughed again. âSorry, sorry. I was only joking.â
âYou know,â Ivy said, and everyone turned to her, âI think Brad is the last person who should object to someoneâs writing being âghosted,â since thatâs exactly what he does for a living.â
Bradâs face grew serious. âI just told you,â he said tightly, âI was joking.â
Ivy appeared to ignore this. âDamn cushy setup,â she muttered. âCushier than people think.â
Brad gave her a surprised, murderous look.
Paul Kavanagh read more of his coming-of-age novel, a passage in which the protagonist experienced his first homosexual encounter. In the middle of the reading, Red yelled out that he hadnât come to this retreat to hear porno. This time Paul, who seemed to have girded himself for blows such as this, simply finished reading and took his seat.
Ellyn Bass read lovingly from her romance, dwelling on the heavy Scottish accents. Tamara rolled her